CHeck grammar as in some places your sentences don't make complete sense (although I understand what you're getting at) - e.g. the first paragraph (read it aloud).
You might want to mention titles and establishing shots (as well as narrative/introduction text to establish time/date/location) to push this up to a Level 4.
CHeck grammar as in some places your sentences don't make complete sense (although I understand what you're getting at) - e.g. the first paragraph (read it aloud).
ReplyDeleteYou might want to mention titles and establishing shots (as well as narrative/introduction text to establish time/date/location) to push this up to a Level 4.
Good job, a solid Level 3 (B)